When choosing the songs for this list, we realized that it’s not just about the lyrics or the words themselves. It’s about the music, the vocalist, and the performance—it all has to work together seamlessly to create something magical. There may be thousands of songs with more creative or brilliant opening lyrics than the ten we’ve selected, but these are the ones we picked because of the scenes they set right from the start. It’s about the delivery; it’s about the magic you feel the moment you hear the song. That’s how we made our choices. We didn’t scour the internet to see what other similar lists included because they often feature the same songs. This is personal—these are the songs that have impacted us throughout our lives. Genuine writing is about making it personal, making it real, and cutting through all the bullshit that’s so prevalent now.
# 10 – Meeting Across The River – Bruce Springsteen
# 9 – What’s He Buiding In There – Tom Waits
Tom Waits’ “What’s He Building in There?” opens with the unsettling lines, “What’s he building in there? What the hell is he building in there?” These words set the stage for a dark, voyeuristic narrative that immediately captures the listener’s attention. The song’s eerie spoken-word delivery, paired with ambient noise and minimalist instrumentation, creates an atmosphere of suspicion and dread. Waits takes on the role of a paranoid neighbor, fixated on the mysterious actions of the man next door, with each line dripping with distrust and a sense of impending doom. The opening lyrics do more than just set a tone—they pull the listener into a world of suburban anxiety, where every sound and movement is laced with potential danger.
Recorded for Waits’ 1999 album Mule Variations, the song was produced by Waits and Kathleen Brennan and recorded at Prairie Sun Recording Studios in Cotati, California. Mule Variations marked a return to Waits’ experimental roots, blending blues, rock, and spoken word in a way that only he could execute. The musicianship on the track is sparse, relying heavily on soundscapes and percussive elements that feel more like background noise than traditional instruments. The song is devoid of a conventional melody, which amplifies the unease and unpredictability that the lyrics suggest. The stripped-down production heightens the effect of Waits’ gravelly narration, making the listener feel as if they’re eavesdropping on something they shouldn’t be.
Critically acclaimed, “What’s He Building in There?” was praised for its unique storytelling and unconventional approach, which diverged from the traditional song structures that dominated the music landscape. While the track itself didn’t chart, the album Mule Variations was a commercial success, winning a Grammy Award for Best Contemporary Folk Album.
# 8 – Same Old Lang Syne – Dan Fogelberg
# 7 – Night Moves – Bob Seger
Bob Seger’s “Night Moves” opens with the vivid line, “I was a little too tall, could’ve used a few pounds, Tight pants points hardly renown, She was a black haired beauty with big dark eyes And points all her own sitting way up high, Way up firm and high.“These lyrics immediately set the scene, capturing the awkwardness and innocence of youth, and placing the listener directly into a nostalgic narrative of teenage romance and self-discovery. Seger’s imagery of the “black-haired beauty with big dark eyes” is more than just a simple description; it’s a moment frozen in time, evoking memories of young love and carefree summer nights. For some of us the best nights of our lives. With each word, Seger invites the audience into a vivid, cinematic recollection of youthful encounters, effortlessly blending the personal and the universal.
Recorded at Nimbus Nine Studios in Toronto in 1976 and produced by Jack Richardson with Punch Andrews, “Night Moves” became a defining song for Seger, marking a pivotal moment in his career. It reached number four on the Billboard Hot 100 in early 1977, serving as the lead single from the album of the same name.
Musically, the song features Seger on vocals and guitar, with Drew Abbott on lead guitar, Robyn Robbins on organ, Alto Reed on saxophone, Chris Campbell on bass, and Charlie Allen Martin on drums.
# 6 – Already Gone – The Eagles
# 5 -All the Girls in the World Beware!!! – Grand Funk
We suspect that there may be some readers who will claim this is the worst set of open lyrics ever written. But that’s all right, bring it on, that’s rock and roll, baby!”All the Girls in the World Beware!!!” by Grand Funk Railroad opens with a set of lyrics that instantly shock the listener, and that’s what we love about it “I got tartar on my teeth, but I don’t care / I got dark brown stains, in my underwear.” It’s a bold, unflinching start that captures the band’s signature style—a blend of brash, tongue-in-cheek humor with a touch of rock and roll irreverence. These opening lines are raw, setting the tone for a song that doesn’t take itself too seriously while still managing to entertain.
Recorded in 1974 and released as the title track on their ninth studio album, All the Girls in the World Beware!!!, the song was produced by Jimmy Ienner, known for his work with other rock giants like Three Dog Night and The Raspberries. The album was recorded at The Swamp, Grand Funk’s home studio in Michigan, giving the band full creative control over its sound. The lineup for this album featured the classic trio of Mark Farner on guitar and vocals, Mel Schacher on bass, and Don Brewer on drums, with additional contributions from Craig Frost on keyboards. This configuration allowed Grand Funk to experiment with funkier rhythms and more adventurous arrangements, which can be heard in the track’s playful blend of rock, funk, and a touch of humor.
The line, “I got dark brown stains, in my underwear,” isn’t just about shock value; it’s a subversive nod to self-awareness and a rejection of the glam rock aesthetics that were dominating the charts at the time. This rawness sets Grand Funk apart from their contemporaries.
# 4 – Rock And Roll High School – The Ramones
This was one of those songs that opened with the chorus line, which we will not count as the opening line. We are going with the opening verse, which to us has always been one of the band’s most iconic. “Well, I don’t care about history / ‘Cause that’s not where I wanna be.” Right from the start, the Ramones establish their stance—one of rebellion, irreverence, and an all-encompassing love for rock and roll over conventional norms. This isn’t just a song; it’s a battle cry for every teenager who ever felt out of place in the rigid structure of high school life. It’s a declaration of independence, wrapped in a two-minute punk anthem that embodies the Ramones’ ethos of simplicity and raw energy.
The song was recorded in 1979 and featured on the soundtrack of the film Rock ‘n’ Roll High School. The lyrics, dripping with sarcasm and teenage angst, perfectly encapsulate the Ramones’ ability to connect with the frustrations of their audience: “I just wanna have some kicks / I just wanna get some chicks.” It’s an anthem for those who prioritize rock ‘n’ roll over rules, a theme that was the very heart of the Ramones’ appeal, which is why this appealed so much to me when I was 17.
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# 3 – Taxi – Harry Chapin
# 2 – Space Oddity – David Bowie
# 1 – “You’re Breaking My Heart” – Harry Nilsson
Well, you know we just had to close out this list with this one. Harry Nilsson pretty much assured very limited airplay when he released this song, but I doubt he really cared. Ultimately, he knew how much loved this song would be by millions of people who so honestly wanted to play it for their own disastrous love lives. Released on Nilsson’s 1972 album Son of Schmilsson, the song opens bluntly with the line, “You’re breaking my heart, you’re tearing it apart… so f*** you.”
Recorded in early 1972 at Trident Studios in London, Son of Schmilsson was produced by Richard Perry, who had also produced Nilsson’s critically acclaimed previous album, Nilsson Schmilsson. Musicians on the track included notable talents such as guitarist Peter Frampton, drummer Jim Gordon, and Klaus Voormann on bass, all of whom added a rich, textured sound that underpins Nilsson’s sharp lyrics. Despite the somewhat playful pop rock arrangement, the opening line’s shock value and the song’s overall irreverence set it apart, from almost anything else in rock music at the time.
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